Once upon a time there was two kids. One was called Night and the other was called Day.
One weekend they found a hole. Day fell in to the hole. Night said he would go back the house and make a ladder. "Here I come!" Night said. He climbed in to the hole he saw a cat breathing fire and birds doing the same thing. "AAAAAH!" Day screamed. Night ran to the scream. Days been kidnapped by the King Snake. how am I going to save her?
"Got it!" Night looked the King Snake in the eyes and said "Leave day alone!" and kicked him in the tummy.
"Day, come quick lets go home".
"But Night, what about the snake?"
"Lets put a boulder over the hole" panted Night.


that is a really good story,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed it very very much,
love Auntie Nonie
Great story Amberley well done :-) I am looking forward to the next one!
ReplyDeleteWhat a cool story Ambie!!!
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Loves MUMMY
What an exciting story. I am looking forward to your next one. You are a clever story writer
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I like your story Amberley.
ReplyDeletePlease keep thinking the stories and then writing them.
Lots of love ... Leo