Friday, October 8, 2010

The Long Summer

Once upon a time Day was picking flowers and along came a flying cat. And picked her up and took her to a lovely place called Lovely Land.

But if wasn't so lovely when the Dark Knight and the King Snake came along. The snake made it so hot that some of the ice skating parks for the cats have melted.

Night looked out of the window and saw a little mushroom patch that was magical and he touched a mushroom. In a blank of an eye he was in Lovely Land.

Night looked up and saw Day and the flying cat swishing around very sadly. But Night didn't know that the snake was behind him. He was grabbed and very soon he was at the Queens castle.

The cat took Day to see the Queen. The Queen said "I went away from the castle because the giant snake took over the castle. I cannot move back until the snake is gone.".

Day said "Night has been taken by the King Snake and if we can break in to the castle we can work together to get rid of the snake."

So they worked together to get rid of the King Snake. The flying cat got ready to pick up the giant snake. Day got ready to break down the door. Night got ready to break out.

The snake was drinking tea. Night screamed "CHARGE" and he broke out of the steel bars. The snake dropped his tea and smiled at Night. Day knocked down the door and the flying cat grabbed the snake and threw him so far away he wasn't seen again in Lovely Land. The Dark Knight was so scared that he ran after the King Snake.

The Queen moved back in and she saw a King that she loved and they needed a kiss of love for Lovely Land to come back.

5 comments:

  1. Hi Amberley
    That was a fantastic story, you are really clever at writing stories.
    Cant wait for the next one.
    Lots of love
    Joy ( Grandmas freind in England ) xxx

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  2. I cant wait to see if the Queen gets the kiss for lovely land to come back!

    Loving these stories baby - you are soooooo clever
    Love Mummy

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  3. Really cool story Amberley. Please keep them coming!

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  4. Lewis and I have just read your story and we want to read some more adventures, please. XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX

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  5. Another good story from you.

    I am already looking forward to the next one.

    Love ... Leo

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